Many thanks for experimenting with 'the story teller's
apprentice'. Please let me know what you think - how you
got on with it, what could be better, any suggestions
welcome, criticisms too, I am happy for you to be really
honest. email your responses back to me
I think that the programme didn't explain to us very well
for what we had to do! The face should be yours (Mr Wallis)
and your voice, because I hated the voice. It should save
itself every time you change the page, because it deletes
it if you change the page without saving it! At the end it
should have bigger boxes, so the writing can fit in!
I feel the program works near perfectly but had a few
saving flaws. Other than that the printout page needs
editable size boxes to suit the amount of text. The lesson
could be better if we had more licences as 5 wasn't
sufficient as we had people bored writing. The voice
strings together too much, the face should be your own and
recorded so as it doesn't string together.
I thought this programme was okay. I didn't really enjoy it
because I found it not really to do with art more to do
with English. I found the talking man funny, but may need a
clearer voice.
I think the lesson was quite good but when you submit it
doesn't always save. I think it was quite good that the man
told you what to do. I think that the website could also be
good by you making pictures to go with your story. The man
was a little bit hard to understand as he didn't speak
clearly. I think you could choose a man or woman explaining
you what to do.
I think it was really fun but the voice was annoying. They
should have people like on the Tom Tom for the voiceover,
and clearer. I didn't like it. They should give bigger
paragraphs at the end. It should be Internet accessible so
you can share your work.
The programme is really good apart from the man he needs to
be better looking and needs a different voice. Also instead
of helpful information you can put pages that you wrote so
you check on them more easily.
The lesson is very good but I don't understand it very well
because his voice is a bit hard to hear. The man is a bit
scary because his eyes move around. It would be better if
the voice and the head were different.